Saturday, July 12, 2008

Haiku #8

yes I was bitter..
I now laugh at how I was..
but still I miss you..

1 comment:

Lucas Diemer said...

My japanese is a bit rusty, but isn't Haiku a kind of rhythmic japanese poetry? haha :)
It's amazing how the persona in your poems is so realistic, but, at the same time, so introspective. It's hard to find a perspective like this in Literature. You use the words like someone who is building a house of cards - sometimes, people don't know right away the actual meaning of what say, but one thing for sure: each word is there for a reason and they are part of something bigger than a brief poem. You're great!